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2079- First Draft by Alex

                          

In a city called the grease pit in 2079, a boy named Devin beck is living in a world of rich and the poor Devin was on the poor side of the city grease pit 

And there is nothing for him except his treehouse and his dog Bacon 

There’s barely any food or water for the poor side of this town because of the rich. they took everything from the grease pit and took it up to their giant towers to survive and there is a dam at the ocean and took all of our water

And it’s because of doctor moneybags the richest of them all he created an app on everyone’s phone called surge it was an app that controlled everything and when it was released it changed everything it was controlling you telling you what to do and it started taking lives away from people and families. Devin lost his sister to surge he never saw her again 

That’s why Devin wants revenge.

My script for Scene 2 scene: Jim the Hotdog: The Animated Movie

 

   SCENE 2

 

A big wide shot of them racing to the docks 

Finally, they get to the docs and there are lights and screams of joy and the roller coaster making noise on the track jim looks at the ride and gives a little shiver they go buy tickets and a guy says 5 dollars a person relish dude get out 10 dollars 

 

  • Relish dude says 2 kids today ser 
  • The man takes the money and lets them though
  • Relish dude says ya excited Jim 
  • Jim gives a nervous yeah relish dude
  • They get in line and there behind 3 bullies and relish dude stairs at them 
  • 1 of the bullies says what are you looking at nerd 
  • The other bullys gives a chuckle haha yeah nerd 
  • Jim pushes one of the bullies back off guys not cool 
  • One of the bully says let’s get outta here this is lame anyway
  • There are only 3 people left in line and then it’s their turn to go on 
  • Some guy shouts you can’t escape it Jim almost feels that was to him and him only

The Man with a Cap by Alex M

Image result for man with a black hatEvery day, when I’m on a bus, I see a fairly strange man (who sits in the back of the bus) with a small-cap that was pure black. I don’t mind him, but one day, he had a red cap on, so when he walked out of the bus, I silently followed him until he got to his house. It was rickety and broken down. It looked like the old school shed. He went inside and closed the shed. 

I crept in and I saw out of amazement thousands of different colored caps all in one room…